What kind of car do you want to buy when you\'re all grown up?
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I want to buy sedan and suv I grow up because Korea normally car is sedan and suv and I like jeep because I like pig car.
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What kind of car do you want to buy when you\'re all grown up?
I want to buy sedan and suv I grow up because Korea normally car is sedan and suv and I like jeep because I like pig car.
>> I want to buy a sedan and an SUV when I grow up because, in Korea, cars are usually sedans or SUVs. I also like Jeeps because I think they look like pig cars.
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