What kind of cars do you think look the best?

2017-07-14 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I think people want to show off their wealth and try to look like happy to their friends using facebook posting or buying luxury stuffs like expensive cars.There is no wonder people would like to buy the most expensive car. It is not only a status symbol, but also a display of their wealth. Anyway if I can afford to buy a expensive car, I would choose Benz or Ferrari vehicle. In present circumstances, I want to have SUV vehicle because It is safer than a sedan and fuel efficiency is better.

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I think people want to show off their wealth and try to look like happy to their friends using facebook posting or buying luxury stuffs like expensive cars.

>> I think people want to show their wealth and try to show that they are happy to their friends by posting the things that they have and the things that they bought like luxury cars on Facebook.

There is no wonder people would like to buy the most expensive car. 

>>Well, there is no wonder that people like to buy the most expensive car.
 It is not only a status symbol, but also a display of their wealth.

>>It is not only the symbol of their status  but also to show that they are wealthy.
 Anyway if I can afford to buy a expensive car, I would choose Benz or Ferrari vehicle. In present circumstances,

>>Anyway, if I can afford to buy an expensive car then I would rather choose one of the car from Mercedes-Benz  or Ferrari.

 I want to have SUV vehicle because It is safer than a sedan and fuel efficiency is better.

>>However, I want to have a Sport Utility Vehicle because I think it is safer and you can also save up fuel compared to a Sedan.

   

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