What kind of challenge would analytics department and Bloomberg face?

2022-04-22 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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Bloomberg\'s challenge is visualizing the dataset into a consumable format for actionable insight. The financial market is agile, and Bloomberg process 200 billion datasets per day, including regulatory transformation, which updates in a fast-paced manner. Then there is a customer base. Bloomberg is a market leader with over 325,000 clients. However, there are competitors in the market, so Bloomberg needs to prove its preponderance in the market. The challenge within the analytics department is to expand the learning curve by keeping up with enhancements and offerings because the analytics representative is the first-line support provider of Bloomberg Professional Service for a prompt and tailored solution. Another challenge comes from understanding the cultural context of an extensive customer base. Knowing the language and relaying the information are different. Therefore, representatives need to grasp cultural context nuances when delivering information.

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Thanks for this Aciel!

Bloomberg\'s challenge is visualizing the dataset into a consumable format for actionable insight. 
>>>  correct 
The financial market is agile, and Bloomberg process 200 billion datasets per day, including regulatory transformation, which updates in a fast-paced manner. 
>>The financial market is agile, and Bloomberg processes 200 billion datasets per day, including regulatory transformation, which updates in a fast-paced manner.   
>>> OR: The financial market is agile, and Bloomberg is processessing 200 billion datasets per day, including regulatory transformation, which updates in a fast-paced manner.   
Then there is a customer base. 
>>>  correct 
Bloomberg is a market leader with over 325,000 clients. 
>>>  correct   
However, there are competitors in the market, so Bloomberg needs to prove its preponderance in the market. 
>>>  correct 
The challenge within the analytics department is to expand the learning curve by keeping up with enhancements and offerings because the analytics representative is the first-line support provider of Bloomberg Professional Service for a prompt and tailored solution. 
>>>  correct 
Another challenge comes from understanding the cultural context of an extensive customer base. 
>>>  correct 
Knowing the language and relaying the information are different. 
>>>  correct   
Therefore, representatives need to grasp cultural context nuances when delivering information.
>>>  correct 

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