What kind of child hood is good enough for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
My good enough child hood is I was in the first grade in elementary school because very short class time.
So I like my first grade in elementary school.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your first corrected composition, Jimmy. Please take a look at the corrections below.
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Jean~~
What kind of childhood is good enough for you?
My good enough child hood is I was in the first grade in elementary school because very short class time.
So I like my first grade in elementary school.
>>> My favorite part of elementary school was first grade. I loved it because the classes were very short.
>>> OR: I enjoyed first grade a lot because the school days were short.
>>> [The original text contains two sentences with a similar message: the speaker enjoyed first grade because the school days were short. By combining and rephrasing these ideas, you can create a much clearer and more natural-sounding statement. ]
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