What kind of developments might happen in health care in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
as time goes by, people's health is weaker and weaker.
so we have to suggest something like health machine.
but most people are busy and they claim that they don't have enough time for exercise.
so im not sure exactly, scientist will develop health machine for them,
강사 첨삭
as time goes by, people\'s health is weaker and weaker.
>> As time goes by, people\'s health get weaker and weaker.
so we have to suggest something like health machine.
>> We have to suggest something. A good example would be a health machine.
but most people are busy and they claim that they don\'t have enough time for exercise.
>> Most people are busy and they claim that they don\'t have enough time for exercise.
so im not sure exactly, scientist will develop health machine for them,
>> I am not exactly sure but scientists should develop a machine that could help them improve their health.
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