What kind of diet does your eldest son do?

2018-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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He chooses to eat when he makes body. He reduces carbohydrates and eat protein (chicken breast, protein shake,egg white, no instant food, fat free, salt free,vegetables) I think he seems so hard to live Life is nothing. You only live once. I hope he will be comfortable

강사 첨삭

He chooses to eat when he makes body.

>> He chooses the foods that will make him build muscles.

He reduces carbohydrates and eat protein

>> He reduces carbohydrates and eats protein.


(chicken breast, protein shake,egg white, no instant food, fat free, salt free, vegetables)

>> (chicken breast, protein shake,egg white, no instant food, fat free, salt free and vegetables)

I think he seems so hard to live Life is nothing.

>> I think he seems to live life like it\'s nothing.


You only live once.

>> CORRECT

 I hope he will be comfortable

>> CORRECT



Wow, I remember the time I was like that in America kkkkk I really want to do it again. But, I do not have time these days >___< I feel tired everyday. But, I really like what I\'m doing kkkkkk I hope I can squeeze in working out in the gym in my daily schedule. my only exercise is dancing every weekend kkkk   

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