What kind of diet is popular in Korea these days?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many ways in Korea.
Nowadays A-B-C juice is popular with people.
I also saw it on TV. A-B-C juice means Apple-Beet-Carrot.
The juice is useful for our abdominal obesity.
It\'s like detox.
But I didn\'t try it.
If there is a person who experienced good result, I\'ll try right now..
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss [이름]. Thank you for this. I wonder how this works though. Do they have the juice only for breakfast? Do they drink it with other meals? The juice does sound healthy though.
- T. Beth
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There are many ways in Korea.>>> OR: There are many kinds of diets in Korea.
Nowadays A-B-C juice is popular with people.
>>> Nowadays, A-B-C juice is popular among people.
I also saw it on TV. >>> correct.
A-B-C juice means Apple-Beet-Carrot.
>>> correct.
The juice is useful for our abdominal obesity.
The juice is useful for our abdominal obesity.
>>> correct.
It\'s like detox.
It\'s like detox.
>>> correct.
But I didn\'t try it.
But I didn\'t try it.
>>> correct.
If there is a person who experienced good result, I\'ll try right now..
If there is a person who experienced good result, I\'ll try right now..
>>> correct.
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