What kind of diet or meal plan do you have? Do you plan the food that you will eat in a day? If yes,
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Nice work, Elic! These sentences are very understandable and simple. Simple sentence are better than complicated ones. There are just some items which I modified a bit to make it more informative. Review some idiomatic phrases that I’ve placed there like “as I age”, also I replaced ‘a little’ with ‘lesser’. Thank you for your efforts and have a nice day ahead!
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Actually, the diet that I don\'t have any thing else.
>> Actually, my diet is very typical, I don’t have anything else.
Because I\'ve never tried it before.
>> Correct.
But in a far future I\'m gonna have a diet that is a meat a little.
>> But in the future, I guess I will have a diet plan which has lesser meat.
As I\'m getting older, I can\'t digest dinning well.
>> As I age, I won’t be able to digest all sorts of food very well.
My stomach will be more sensitive.
>> Correct.
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