What kind of entertainment is popular in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think in my generation, among a lots of entertainments, the camping and screen golf are the hottest so far.
In case of camping culture, if I correct, about 4~5 years have passed since it gained much popularity.
To follow new trend, I also bought a tent and other equipments 3 years ago and I have enjoyed camping with my family.
And I believe screen golf became popular around from 2010 in Korea because I started to learn golf at that time. :-)
As you know, the green fee is still too expensive in Korea to go out golf club, for reference it will cost about $1000 for four members to play golfing in weekend.
On the other hand, that’s why screen golf could become popular rapidly, in case of screen golf, it’s very easy to access because there are many screen golf rooms in the city
And it costs only $30~40 per person, moreover, it’s no need to carry anything because a glove, club and shoes are equipped there.
See you in today class!
강사 첨삭
MR. [이름]!
Hello there :))
HAPPY MONDAY!
Another week of fun and learning. :))
Wow, I wanna try both of these activities! T_T
kkk ~~
There\'s also a screen golf here in our city because there are a lot of Koreans around.
Unfortunately, I have no companion in doing so. kkk ~~
Catch you later !
Teacher Myra
I think in my generation, among a lots of entertainments, the camping and screen golf are the hottest so far.
>>I think in my generation, among lots of entertainments, camping and screen golf are the hottest, so far.
In case of camping culture, if I correct, about 4~5 years have passed since it gained much popularity.
>>In case of our camping culture, if I\'m correct, about 4~5 years have passed since it gained much popularity.
To follow new trend, I also bought a tent and other equipments 3 years ago and I have enjoyed camping with my family.
>>To follow this new trend, I also bought a tent and other equipments 3 years ago and I have enjoyed camping with my family.
And I believe screen golf became popular around from 2010 in Korea because I started to learn golf at that time. :-)
>>And I believe screen golf became popular around 2010 in Korea because I started to learn golf at that time. :-)
As you know, the green fee is still too expensive in Korea to go out golf club, for reference it will cost about $1000 for four members to play golfing in weekend.
>>As you know, the fee is still too expensive in Korea to go out for a golf club. For reference, it costs about $1000 for four members to play golf in weekends.
On the other hand, that’s why screen golf could become popular rapidly, in case of screen golf, it’s very easy to access because there are many screen golf rooms in the city
>>Due to this, screen golf became popular rapidly.One more thing. screen golf is very accesible because there are many screen golf rooms in the city.
And it costs only $30~40 per person, moreover, it’s no need to carry anything because a glove, club and shoes are equipped there.
See you in today class!
>>And it costs only $30~40 per person. Moreover, there\'s no need to carry anything because a glove, club and shoes are equipped there.
See you in today\'s class!
Hello there :))
HAPPY MONDAY!
Another week of fun and learning. :))
Wow, I wanna try both of these activities! T_T
kkk ~~
There\'s also a screen golf here in our city because there are a lot of Koreans around.
Unfortunately, I have no companion in doing so. kkk ~~
Catch you later !
Teacher Myra
I think in my generation, among a lots of entertainments, the camping and screen golf are the hottest so far.
>>I think in my generation, among lots of entertainments, camping and screen golf are the hottest, so far.
In case of camping culture, if I correct, about 4~5 years have passed since it gained much popularity.
>>In case of our camping culture, if I\'m correct, about 4~5 years have passed since it gained much popularity.
To follow new trend, I also bought a tent and other equipments 3 years ago and I have enjoyed camping with my family.
>>To follow this new trend, I also bought a tent and other equipments 3 years ago and I have enjoyed camping with my family.
And I believe screen golf became popular around from 2010 in Korea because I started to learn golf at that time. :-)
>>And I believe screen golf became popular around 2010 in Korea because I started to learn golf at that time. :-)
As you know, the green fee is still too expensive in Korea to go out golf club, for reference it will cost about $1000 for four members to play golfing in weekend.
>>As you know, the fee is still too expensive in Korea to go out for a golf club. For reference, it costs about $1000 for four members to play golf in weekends.
On the other hand, that’s why screen golf could become popular rapidly, in case of screen golf, it’s very easy to access because there are many screen golf rooms in the city
>>Due to this, screen golf became popular rapidly.One more thing. screen golf is very accesible because there are many screen golf rooms in the city.
And it costs only $30~40 per person, moreover, it’s no need to carry anything because a glove, club and shoes are equipped there.
See you in today class!
>>And it costs only $30~40 per person. Moreover, there\'s no need to carry anything because a glove, club and shoes are equipped there.
See you in today\'s class!
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