What kind of entertainment is popular in your country?

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There are many kinds of entertainment such as movie, music, game in our country.

>> There are many kinds of entertainment in our country such as movies, music and games.
Among others, music is the most popular for young people these days due to Hanliu(Korean Syndrome). 

>> Correct
 As current trend reflects, many audition programs emerged in several ways and many young people were attending the audition.

>> Correct
 It is within bounds to say that young people make the current trend or popular things such as entertainment, TV programs, clothes and so on.

>> Corret
 That is, if we would like to know what is popular things(or trend) of the country, we shall know the young people\'s think.

>> That is, if we would like to know what these trends are in our country, then we consult the young people\'s opinion.