What kind of exercise - if any - do you do, and how often do you do it? What effects does it have on

2019-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Koreans should get a medical check up every year that are provided by our government. That is a basic examination like chest X-ray, blood tests and dental examinations. I got it one month ago. I need to lose 2 kg and gain 4 kg of the muscle. So, I decided to do running or riding a bicycle to build my muscles. I have run since last month and have tried to do it everyday. I always go the the stream and do running or riding a bicycle along the stream. I have a watch that is able to check the exercise record such as distance that I run, calories that I am burned. I always feel refreshed and relaxed whenever I am done with my exercise. I feel like that good hormone came out from my body after working up a big sweat.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]. Great job doing your homework. It seems you thought deeply about it and I appreciate you accomplishing it. Keep it up! Have a good one today. 


Koreans should get a medical check up every year that are provided by our government. 
>>> Koreans should get a medical checkup every year that is provided by our government. 

That is a basic examination like chest X-ray, blood tests and dental examinations. 
>>> There are basic examinations like chest X-ray, blood tests and dental examinations. 

I got it one month ago.
>>> CORRECT =) 

I need to lose 2 kg and gain 4 kg of the muscle. 
>>> I need to lose 2 kilograms and gain 4 kilograms of muscle. 

So, I decided to do running or riding a bicycle to build my muscles. 
>>> So, I decided to do running or ride a bicycle to build my muscles. 

I have run since last month and have tried to do it everyday. 
>>> I have run since last month and have tried to do it every day. 

I always go the the stream and do running or riding a bicycle along the stream. 
>>> I always go to the stream and run or ride a bicycle along the stream. 

I have a watch that is able to check the exercise record such as distance that I run, calories that I am burned. 
>>> I have a watch that is able to check the exercise record such as the distance that I ran, and calories that I burned. 

I always feel refreshed and relaxed whenever I am done with my exercise. 
>>> CORRECT =) 

I feel like that good hormone came out from my body after working up a big sweat.
>>> CORRECT =)

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