What kind of exercise do you enjoy the most?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t like a hard exercises.
And I don\'t like to overwork to train my body.
I like a golf and a indoor gym.
And I like the process of analyzing somethings and finding reasons.
The reason I enjoy golf for a long time is that golf is not a hard exercise and I can exercise by analyzing each movement.
Among indoor gyms, I especially like indoor bike riding.
It\'s fun to watch my body to endure by adjusting the intensity and increasing the time every day.
강사 첨삭
Hi David! I read your response, and you did a great job expressing your thoughts about exercise. You clearly prefer activities that involve analysis, like golf and indoor biking, and you explained your reasons well. I can see that you value a balanced approach to fitness; something that challenges you without being too exhausting. Keep up the great work!
~ T. Lia
I don\'t like a hard exercises.
>> I don\'t like hard exercises.
And I don\'t like to overwork to train my body.
>> I don\'t like to overwork when training my body.
I like a golf and a indoor gym.
>> I like golf and indoor gyms.
And I like the process of analyzing somethings and finding reasons.
>> I like the process of analyzing things and finding reasons.
The reason I enjoy golf for a long time is that golf is not a hard exercise and I can exercise by analyzing each movement.
>> The reason I have enjoyed golf for a long time is that it is not a strenuous exercise, and I can work out by analyzing each movement.
Among indoor gyms, I especially like indoor bike riding.
>> Among indoor gym activities, I especially like indoor bike riding.
It\'s fun to watch my body to endure by adjusting the intensity and increasing the time every day.
>> It\'s fun to see my body endure by adjusting the intensity and increasing the duration each day.
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