What kind of exercise do you want to do soon?
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to learn dancing. I could not dance berofe. I was planning to learn dancing when I retire, but I did not start yet. I will start learning when I get healthier. Dancing has exciting music and rhythm. It is really fun and gives me energy.
*** Hi, Donna
I am going on summer vacation from this Wednesday to Saturday, so I will not be able to attend class on Wednesday and Friday. Sorry I did not tell you earlier, it was decided suddenly. I will be back after a nice trip. See you next Monday~
강사 첨삭
Hello, Jane!
Dancing to the tune and beat of your favorite music is one of the best recreational activities. It is relaxing as much as tiring. ^^ You can enjoy it by yourself and even more with others.
I understand that you have to go on a vacation. Your life became more interesting after retirement. I am so happy for you. Go and enjoy! Tell me about it when you are back.
You wrote all correct sentences on your homework answer. Well done!
See you soon.
-T. Donna~
>> Correct! Very good sentences!
*** Hi, Donna
I am going on summer vacation from this Wednesday to Saturday, so I will not be able to attend class on Wednesday and Friday. Sorry I did not tell you earlier, it was decided suddenly. I will be back after a nice trip. See you next Monday~
I am going on summer vacation from this Wednesday to Saturday, so I will not be able to attend class on Wednesday and Friday. Sorry I did not tell you earlier, it was decided suddenly. I will be back after a nice trip. See you next Monday~
>> *** Hi, Donna
I am going on a summer vacation from this Wednesday to Saturday, so I will not be able to attend class on Wednesday and Friday. Sorry, I did not tell you earlier, it was decided suddenly. I will be back after a nice trip. See you next Monday~파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.