What kind of exercise would you like to try in the future?

2022-07-20 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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*risk Due to my work, I have to take a risk. All project is not sucessful. I work with a risk of failure. *What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program? I want to include aerobic exercise and filates. Aerobic exercise can lose calorie. But, fliates can be better muscular strenth. I do not well aerobic exercise and filates. I lazy. *What kind of exercise would you like to try in the future? I really want to try learn tennis. I serching out information tennis academmy.

강사 첨삭

Wow! You are incredible, Soolyn! You answered all the questions today. Thank you!-Faith-

*risk

>> CORRECT
Due to my work, I have to take a risk.

>> CORRECT

All project is not sucessful.

>> All projects are not successful.
I work with a risk of failure.
>> CORRECT
*What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program?

>> CORRECT
I want to include aerobic exercise and filates.

>> I want to include aerobic exercise and Pilates.
Aerobic exercise can lose calorie.

>> CORRECT
But, fliates can be better muscular strenth.
>> But, Pilates can be better for muscular strength.
I do not well aerobic exercise and filates. I lazy.
>> I do not do well at aerobic exercise and Pilates because I am lazy.
*What kind of exercise would you like to try in the future?

>> CORRECT
I really want to try learn tennis.

>> I really want to try learning tennis.
I serching out information tennis academmy.

>> I search for information about a tennis academy.

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