What kind of exercise would you recommend to stay healthy?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are many kind of exercise to keep healthy.
Experts give advice people to do aerobic and muscular exercise together.
I think depending on personal health condition,the exercise can be various.
I recommend walking, jogging, yoga and Pilates consistently.
It\'s good for everyone to try.
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There are many kind of exercise to keep healthy.
>> There are many kinds of exercise to keep healthy.
Experts give advice people to do aerobic and muscular exercise together.
Experts give advice people to do aerobic and muscular exercise together.
>> Experts advise people to do aerobic and muscular exercises together.
I think depending on personal health condition,the exercise can be various.
>> I think that depending on personal health conditions, the exercises can vary.
I recommend walking, jogging, yoga and Pilates consistently.
I recommend walking, jogging, yoga and Pilates consistently.
>> Correct
It\'s good for everyone to try.
It\'s good for everyone to try.
>> It is good for everyone to try them.
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