What kind of fashion do you think will never go out of style?

2019-02-28 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

We always think what we wear in the morning and this can be a little bit stressful for people to chose matched clothes in their closet. I think blue jeans and white shirts are items that will never go out of style. Blue jeans match very well with whatever we put on. Blue jeans make people looking young, are convenient and comfort. White shirts have a same advantages like blue jeans. However, white shirts are easily spoiled, so people need to wash it whenever they wear it. I like buying mono color clothes because I can were it for a long time. It doesn\'t get effected from trend.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for doing your homework [이름]! Yes. Many people like to wear jeans. So do I. ^^

~~Teacher Eunice~~

We always think what we wear in the morning and this can be a little bit stressful for people to chose matched clothes in their closet. 

>> We always think what we have to wear in the morning and this can be a little bit stressful for people to choose matched clothes from their closet. 
I think blue jeans and white shirts are items that will never go out of style.

>> CORRECT

Blue jeans match very well with whatever we put on. 

>> Blue jeans matches very well with whatever we put on. 
Blue jeans make people looking young, are convenient and comfort.

>> Blue jeans , which make people look younger, are comfortable.

White shirts have a same advantages like blue jeans.

>> White shirts have the same advantages as blue jeans.

However, white shirts are easily spoiled, so people need to wash it whenever they wear it.

>> However, white shirts easily get dirty, so people need to wash it before wearing it.

I like buying mono color clothes because I can were it for a long time. It doesn\'t get effected from trend.

>> I like buying mono color clothes because I can wear for a long time. It doesn\'t get lose from the trends.

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