What kind of feelings do you usually feel every day? Write about why you feel them.
학생이 쓴 원문
I usually feel happy every day.
Because I can play with my friends, watch TV, play games.
So I\'m happy child ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Yale!
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Jean~~
What kind of feelings do you usually feel every day? Write about why you feel them.
I usually feel happy every day.
Because I can play with my friends, watch TV, play games.
>> I usually feel happy every day because I can play with my friends, watch TV, and play games.
So I\'m happy child ^^
>> So I\'m a happy child.
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