What kind of festival in Korea would you like to go to someday?
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Every spring, many city in Korea hold a cherry blossom festival.
It\'s very beautiful scenery, all of the world is pink.
I sometimes go to enjoy cherry blossom.
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Every spring, many city in Korea hold a cherry blossom festival.
>> Every spring, A lot of cities in Korea will hold a cherry blossom festival.
It\'s very beautiful scenery, all of the world is pink.
>> It has very beautiful scenery and everything is pink.
I sometimes go to enjoy cherry blossom.
>> I sometimes go to enjoy and watch cherry blossoms.
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