What kind of food do you prefer having in the restaurant ?

2025-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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It depends on what kind of people I am eating with. When I have a company dinner, I prefer having charcoal grilled pork belly or beef with bomb liquor(called by Koreans) made by mixing Korean alcohol, Soju with beer. Sometimes I eat raw fish, sushi and sea food. And after finishing the first dinner, I and my colleagues usually go to a pub for a second dinner. I and my co-workers usually have sharing fried chicken and beer there. It\'s the same when I have dinner with male junior employees or friends. But it is different when I have dinner with my female junior employees or daughters. In that case, I usually go to an Italian restaurant and eat pasta and steak. I also drink wine with my female junior co-workers. At lunchtime, I go to fast food places like McDonald\'s or Subway with them and eat hamburgers or sandwiches with coke.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
Drinking is really part of the Korean company culture, I guess. 
Anyway, I can see the difference. 
I wonder if you eat out with both male and female co-workers, too.
_T. SHAY^^
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It depends on what kind of people I am eating with.
>>Correct
OR: It depends on the people I eat out with.
When I have a company dinner, I prefer having charcoal grilled pork belly or beef with bomb liquor(called by Koreans) made by mixing Korean alcohol, Soju with beer.
>>When I have a company dinner, I prefer having charcoal grilled pork belly or beef with bomb liquor(a term used by Koreans) made by mixing Korean alcohol - soju and beer.
Sometimes I eat raw fish, sushi and sea food.
>>Correct
OR: There are also times when I eat raw fish, sushi, and seafood.

And after finishing the first dinner, I and my colleagues usually go to a pub for a second dinner.
>>And after having the first dinner, my colleagues and I usually go to a pub for a second dinner.
OR: After having dinner, my colleagues and I usually go to a pub for another round.
I and my co-workers usually have sharing fried chicken and beer there.
>>My co-workers and I usually share fried chicken and beer.
It\'s the same when I have dinner with male junior employees or friends.
>>Correct
OR: I do the same thing, when I have dinner with male junior employees or friends.
But it is different when I have dinner with my female junior employees or daughters.
>>Correct
OR: Of course, it\'s different when I have dinner with my female junior employees or my daughters.
In that case, I usually go to an Italian restaurant and eat pasta and steak.
>>Correct
OR: In that case, we usually eat at an Italian restaurant, not Korean restaurant.
I also drink wine with my female junior co-workers.
>>Correct
OR: I also have wine with my female junior co-workers. 
At lunchtime, I go to fast food places like McDonald\'s or Subway with them and eat hamburgers or sandwiches with coke.
>>Correct
OR: We usually have food from McDonald\'s or Subway for lunch. 

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