What kind of food will you not eat?
학생이 쓴 원문
What kind of food will you not eat?
I know dog meat is good for our healthy food.
Especially many men prefer to eat it in the hot summer season.
May diary:
June 20, 2022 (Monday)
I was supposed to have poem gathering today in the evening.
I could see members for the first time after Covid-19 outbreak.
As soon as I finished work I arrived the café we reserved.
When we went to there. I could see some members
We shared greeting and ordered coffee and tea each other.
After that, we recited a poem to each other front of our members.
I was in good mood when they was reciting the poem and I was so happy the time.
강사 첨삭
Hi Julia!
Well I guess, you\'ve got lots of free time in your hands. You\'re doing your homework, great job!! ^^
Thank you for this and I am expecting to receive more answers from you. Keep motiveated!
Aki~
I know dog meat is good for our healthy food.
>>> I know dog meat is considered as healthy food.
>>> I know that dog meat is good for our body.
Especially many men prefer to eat it in the hot summer season.
>>> Especially many men prefer to eat it during the hot summer season.
May diary:
>> My diary
June 20, 2022 (Monday)
I was supposed to have poem gathering today in the evening.
>>> I was supposed to have a poem gathering today in the evening.
>>> I was supposed to have a poem gathering today this evening.
I could see members for the first time after Covid-19 outbreak.
>>> It would be the first time seeing the members after the outbreak of Covid19.
As soon as I finished work I arrived the café we reserved.
>>> As soon as I finished work I arrived at the cafe that we reserved.
When we went to there. I could see some members
>>> When we went there. I could see some members
We shared greeting and ordered coffee and tea each other.
>>> We exchanged greetings and ordered some coffee and tea for everyone.
After that, we recited a poem to each other front of our members.
>>> After that, we recited a poem to each other in front of our members.
>>> After that, everyone recited a poem in front of the members.
I was in good mood when they was reciting the poem and I was so happy the time.
>>> I was in a good mood when they were reciting the poem and I was so happy at that time.
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