What kind of help would you hesitate giving other people?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will do my best as I can. Their pleasure is my pleasure too.
And I think someday I will be also got their help.
But I hesitate to lend some money to other people.
If I am rich or financial well, I just could give little money.
When I was about 15 years old, my father lent his co-worker some money (it was probably 30 million won).
But my father didn\'t receive that because his co-worker was swindler.
He asked my father that if you can some money, I\'ll pay you several times more interest.
But my father didn\'t receive any money. And he broke relationship .
Lately, my father never lend money even cousin. This situation can cause to is[이름].
So I also accept this.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]. Thank you for this. Money is indeed a sensitive matter to most people. There is this famous saying that goes like this \"never lend or borrow money from a friend.\"
- T. Beth
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I will do my best as I can. >>> OR: I will do the best that I can.
Their pleasure is my pleasure too.
>>> correct
And I think someday I will be also got their help.
>>> And I think I would someday receive their help.
And I think someday I will be also got their help.
>>> And I think I would someday receive their help.
But I hesitate to lend some money to other people.
>>> correct
If I am rich or financial well, I just could give little money.
If I am rich or financial well, I just could give little money.
>>> If I am rich or doing well financially, I could just give little money.
When I was about 15 years old, my father lent his co-worker some money (it was probably 30 million won).
>>> correct
But my father didn\'t receive that because his co-worker was swindler.
>>> But my father didn\'t get it back because his co-worker was a swindler.
He asked my father that if you can some money, I\'ll pay you several times more interest.
He asked my father that if you can some money, I\'ll pay you several times more interest.
>>> He told my father that if he can lend some money, he\'ll pay him back with higher interest.
But my father didn\'t receive any money.
>>> correct
And he broke relationship .
>>> Their relationship eventually ended.
Lately, my father never lend money even cousin.
>>> Their relationship eventually ended.
Lately, my father never lend money even cousin.
>>> Lately, my father never lend money even to cousins.
This situation can cause to is[이름].
>>> This situation can cause an is[이름].
So I also accept this.
>>> correct
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