What kind of hobbies would you like to try in the future?
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I would like to play an instrument in the future. especially, I have considered playing a soprano saxophone. It has good sound and looks cool. However, it is not easy to learn because it is expensive itself also entails lots of lessons to play. So, someday when I have much free time and money I would be definitely playing it.
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I would like to play an instrument in the future.
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especially, I have considered playing a soprano saxophone.
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It has good sound and looks cool.
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However, it is not easy to learn because it is expensive itself also entails lots of lessons to play.
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So, someday when I have much free time and money I would be definitely playing it.
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Wow, that is actually nice ^^ kkk I would love to try that too and Piano, and Violin.... and Ciello kkkk
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