What kind of hobby do you like to do with your friends?
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One of my favorite hobby to do with my friends is to go bowling. It\'s always joyful to do with friends even if they don\'t know the rules. If Covid-19 come to an end, I will go bowling with my friends directly.
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What kind of hobby do you like to do with your friends?
One of my favorite hobby to do with my friends is to go bowling.
>>One of my favorite hobbies to do with my friends is bowling.
It\'s always joyful to do with friends even if they don\'t know the rules.
>>It\'s always joyful to do it with friends even if they don\'t know the rules.
If Covid-19 come to an end, I will go bowling with my friends directly.
>>If Covid-19 comes to an end, I will play bowling with my friends immediately.
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