What kind of house or apartment would you like to have?

2021-05-21 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Home work I prefer more an apartment 2.Is it better to rent or buy a property? I have interested to buy a property 3.Should adults with jobs still live with their parents but pay the rent? I think to be independent of one\'s parents when a person become an adult

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름] [이름]!

Thank you for submitting your sentences to me. ^^

Have a wonderful night and always take care!

~Teacher Gina

1.Homework
I prefer more an apartment.

>> I prefer an apartment more.

2.Is it better to rent or buy a property?
I have interested to buy a property

>> I have an interest in buying a property.

>> Or: I am interested to buy a property.

3.Should adults with jobs still live with their parents but pay the rent?
I think to be independent of one\'s parents when a person become an adult

>> I think a person should be independent from his or her parents when he or she becomes an adult.

>> Or: I think people should be independent from their parents when they become an adult.

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기