What kind of ideas do you consider to be \"great\"?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I see the something creative, I might think that is great idea.
For example, the smart-phone was best item last few decade.
When I saw first smart-phone, I was shocked.
However if I think more, the smart-phone was not totaly new item. it just combined many items such as a phone, computer.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
When I see the something creative, I might think that is great idea.
>> When I see something creative, I might think it is a great idea.
For example, the smart-phone was best item last few decade.
>> For example, the smartphone was the best item of the last few decades.
When I saw first smart-phone, I was shocked.
>> When I saw my first smartphone, I was shocked.
OR >> The first time I saw a smartphone, I was amazed.
However if I think more, the smart-phone was not totaly new item. it just combined many items such as a phone, computer.
>> However, if I think more about it, the smartphone was not a completely new item—it just combined many existing items, such as a phone and a computer.
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