What kind of impression do you want people to have about you?
학생이 쓴 원문
The reson why my husband marries with me is right my personality.
My personality is bright and smille.
Also I don\'t like to be dark envirenment.
So in my around of people like my bright personality.
For many years ago, I used to care about other\'s interest.
But now I don\'t think matter than before.
Just I try to work my all work sincerely.
Same with my family .
If I do my best anything ,someday people will think of me that I\'m a good woman.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Thank you for this. It\'s true what they say, when we are older we care less about what people think about us.
- T. Beth
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The reson why my husband marries with me is right my personality.>>> The reason why my husband married me is because of my personality.
My personality is bright and smille.
>>> My personality is bright and I smile a lot.
Also I don\'t like to be dark envirenment.
>>> Also, I don\'t like to be in a dark environment.
So in my around of people like my bright personality.
>>> So people around me like my bright personality.
For many years ago, I used to care about other\'s interest.
>>> correct
But now I don\'t think matter than before.
But now I don\'t think matter than before.
>>> But now I don\'t think they matter more than before.
Just I try to work my all work sincerely.
Just I try to work my all work sincerely.
>>> I just try to do my work sincerely.
Same with my family.
Same with my family.
>>> correct
If I do my best anything, someday people will think of me that I\'m a good woman.
If I do my best anything, someday people will think of me that I\'m a good woman.
>>> correct
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