what kind of job do you think you will get after, college?
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l think i will be architect
because my major is professional study, and I like architecture still
after 15 years i have my office of architecture with my husband
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l think i will be architect
>>>l think, I will be an Architect.
because my major is professional study, and I like architecture still
>>>Because my major is professional study and I still like Architecture.
after 15 years i have my office of architecture with my husband
>>>After 15 years, I will have my Architecture office with my husband.
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