What kind of job would you never consider of having or applying for? Why?

2016-12-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There are 3D jobs that people don’t like to have: Difficult, Dirty, Dangerous. I think it is quite natural for people not to like to have such 3D jobs. Who doesn’t want a decent and high-pay job? However, considering the current situation where a lot of young people are complaining about the difficulty of getting a job, while employers are also having a hard time to hire employees, there is a huge gap between job seekers and employers. Most young people don’t want to work under tough working conditions, but still want a job that is socially regarded as a good job. Simply they don’t work for a small and unknown company. Small and venture companies might not pay a high salary and working environment might as good as that of large companies. However, not all the people have only such good jobs. Although it is difficult, our society need the people who work for such difficult and low paid jobs. Although I'm not blame young kids for only pursuing the best of the best, they should ~.

강사 첨삭

Good day to you Sir [이름]. ^^
I hope that you are having a great day.

I appreciate that you sent a composition today.

I agree with all of the things that you wrote below.

I can say that if we encounter a difficult job or task, we just have to think positive and take it as a challenge.

It will make us a more competent person. Have a great day.

See you in class.
Teacher Nina


There are 3D jobs that people don’t like to have: Difficult, Dirty, Dangerous.

>> correct

I think it is quite natural for people not to like to have such 3D jobs.

>> correct

Who doesn’t want a decent and high-pay job?

>> correct

However, considering the current situation where a lot of young people are complaining about the difficulty of getting a job, while employers are also having a hard time to hire employees, there is a huge gap between job seekers and employers. 

>> correct

Most young people don’t want to work under tough working conditions, but still want a job that is socially regarded as a good job.

>> correct

Simply they don’t work for a small and unknown company.

>> correct

Small and venture companies might not pay a high salary and working environment might as good as that of large companies.

>> Did you mean: Small and venture companies might not pay a high salary and the working environment might not be as good as that of large companies.

However, not all the people have only such good jobs.

>> correct

Although it is difficult, our society need the people who work for such difficult and low paid jobs.

>> correct

Although I\'m not blame young kids for only pursuing the best of the best, they should ~.

>> Although I don\'t blame young kids for only pursuing the best of the best, they should ~.

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