What kind of job would you never consider of having or applying for? Why?
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I agree with all of the things that you wrote below.
I can say that if we encounter a difficult job or task, we just have to think positive and take it as a challenge.
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There are 3D jobs that people don’t like to have: Difficult, Dirty, Dangerous.
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I think it is quite natural for people not to like to have such 3D jobs.
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Who doesn’t want a decent and high-pay job?
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However, considering the current situation where a lot of young people are complaining about the difficulty of getting a job, while employers are also having a hard time to hire employees, there is a huge gap between job seekers and employers.
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Most young people don’t want to work under tough working conditions, but still want a job that is socially regarded as a good job.
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Simply they don’t work for a small and unknown company.
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Small and venture companies might not pay a high salary and working environment might as good as that of large companies.
>> Did you mean: Small and venture companies might not pay a high salary and the working environment might not be as good as that of large companies.
However, not all the people have only such good jobs.
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Although it is difficult, our society need the people who work for such difficult and low paid jobs.
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Although I\'m not blame young kids for only pursuing the best of the best, they should ~.
>> Although I don\'t blame young kids for only pursuing the best of the best, they should ~.
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