What kind of life are you working forward?
학생이 쓴 원문
I used to be afraid of stepping out of my familiar life.
But over time, I\'ve learned that facing new challenges builds my confidence and trust in myself.
My goal in life is to keep growing by embracing change and making a better future.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [Name]! Your story has a hopeful tone too, focusing on growth and building confidence, which makes it motivating. It reminds me that stepping out of comfort zones is often where real progress happens.
-T. Sonny
I used to be afraid of stepping out of my familiar life.
>>Correct!
OR. I used to be afraid of stepping out of my comfort zone.
But over time, I\'ve learned that facing new challenges builds my confidence and trust in myself.
But over time, I\'ve learned that facing new challenges builds my confidence and trust in myself.
>>Correct!
My goal in life is to keep growing by embracing change and making a better future.
>>Correct!
OR. My purpose is to continue growing by welcoming change and shaping a brighter future.
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