What kind of movie do you want to see?

2017-12-24 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Please let me know ~~ Eating delicious food is my first life. Listening to music and singing a song is my second life. Watching movie is my third life. Playing computer game is my fourth life. Studying and learning something is my fifth life. Being with good people is my sixth life. Giving special gift to good person is my seventh life.

강사 첨삭

Hi, my dear [이름]!


I\'m sorry for this late reply.

I wasn\'t able to respond last Friday since I went home directly after the class.

I checked my page just today and I saw your composition.

Here is the list of the movies I\'d like to watch. ^_^

1. Logan

2. Pitch Perfect 3

3. Dunkirk

4. Justice League

5. Wonder Woman

6. Blade Runner

7. Phantom Thread

8. Lady Bird

9. Call me by your name

10. The Big Sick

11. Coco

12. Mother


It\'s okay if you don\'y have it. ^^  Better yet, let me watch some Korean movies with English subtitles. ^_^

Thank you so much [이름] with all my heart.

Merry Christmas! Talk to you on Tuesday!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Please let me know ~~
>>
Please let me know the things that you want.
 Eating delicious food is my first life.
>> 
correct
Listening to music and singing a song is my second life.
>> correct
Watching movie is my third life.
>>
Watching movies is my third life.
Playing computer game is my fourth life.
>>
Playing computer games is my fourth life.
Studying and learning something is my fifth life.

>> correct
>> or: Studying or learning something is my fifth life.
Being with good people is my sixth life.

>> correct
>> or
: To be with good people is my sixth life.
Giving special gift to good person is my seventh life.

>> Giving a special gift to a good person is my seventh life.

>> or: Giving special gifts to good people is my seventh life.

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