What kind of movies do you like?
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Hello [이름] Ji! Thank you for this essay. You did well, I also want to live a care free life in the country. There are a few mistakes in grammar, however these are easily corrected. Keep on improving!
- Teacher Ivy :)
I like cozy movie.
>> I like a cozy movie
My favorite movie is \'Little Forest\'.
>> My favorite movie is the \'Little Forest\'.
When I see that movie, my feeling is comfortable.
>>When I see that movie, I feel comfortable
This movie did not played the villain anyone.
>>This movie did not have any villain.
The make and eat delicious food and played in the country.
>>They make and eat delicious food, and played in the country.
My grandparents lived in Seoul, so I didn\'t went to grandmother\'s house in the country.
>>My grandparents lived in Seoul, so I didn\'t go to grandmother\'s house in the country.
Be I want to visit in the country and I want to live in the country when I was old.
>>I want to visit the country and live there when I’m old.
Because In the city life is very busy and hard.
>> Because the city life is hard and busy.
But in the country life is more freely.
>> But in the country, life is more free
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