What kind of organization are you dreaming of creating?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to create an drawing organization. I felt happy when I was drawing a picture with my friends when I was young. These days, I don\'t have any drawing partner. It will be great if our group member could be a model and we draw a croquis. I read croquis cartoon in the pass. It showed the drawing club\'s rule. There was a rule to choose a topic for the meeting and bring related clothes or props. For example if the theme is red, they wear a red hat or bring a red umbrella. So they pose using the clothes or props they brought when they become models one by one. I was so excited when I read this cartoon and I was looking forward to organizing this dreaming drawing club.
강사 첨삭
Hey, [이름]! That sounds like a fantastic idea! Creating a drawing organization where members can model and use props would be a great way to bring people together and inspire creativity. I love the concept of choosing themes for each meeting—it adds an exciting element to the drawing process. I\'m excited to see how your dream drawing club develops!
~T. Jenna
I want to create an drawing organization.
>> I want to create a drawing organization.
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>>I aspire to establish a drawing organization.
I felt happy when I was drawing a picture with my friends when I was young.
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>>I experienced joy while creating artwork with my friends during my childhood.
These days, I don\'t have any drawing partner.
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>>These days, I\'m flying solo when it comes to drawing.
It will be great if our group member could be a model and we draw a croquis.
>>It would be great if one of our group members could be a model and we could draw croquis.
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>>It would be wonderful if one our group members could serve as models for us to create croquis
I read croquis cartoon in the pass.
>>I read a croquis cartoon in the past.
It showed the drawing club\'s rule.
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>>It out[이름]ed the rules for the drawing club.
There was a rule to choose a topic for the meeting and bring related clothes or props.
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>>There was a rule to select a theme for the meeting and to bring corresponding attire or props.
For example if the theme is red, they wear a red hat or bring a red umbrella.
>>For example, if the theme is red, they wear a red hat or bring a red umbrella.
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>>For instance, if the theme is red, participants don a red hat or bring a red umbrella.
So they pose using the clothes or props they brought when they become models one by one.
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>>They take turns posing with the clothing or props they have brought as they assume the role of models.
I was so excited when I read this cartoon and I was looking forward to organizing this dreaming drawing club.
>>I was so excited when I read this cartoon and I was looking forward to organizing this dream drawing club.
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>>I was thrilled when I read this cartoon, and I looked forward to organizing this dream drawing club.
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