What kind of people do you like to meet?
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I like to meet people who are active and who like to talking with people.
>>I like to meet people who are active and like conversations.
Fist of all, I like to go around and do active activities with take pictures.
>>First of all, I like to go around and do active affairs while taking pictures.
However, I also like static activities such as watching movies or drams, listening to music, or go to an exhibition.
>>However, I also enjoy static activities such as watching movies or dramas, listening to music, or going to exhibitions.
And then I like sharing about these activities (like own thought or opinion) with people even more.
>>And then I like sharing these activities even more with some people.
Sometimes it\'s good to meet someone new person.
>>Sometimes, it\'s good to meet someone new.
This is because meet new people can improve affinity and comfortably share own stories that cannot talk too close people with me.
>>This is because meeting new people can improve affinity and relationship as I share my own stories to people who are not close to me.
At the same time, I also like to get to know another new person.
>>At the same time, I also get to know new people.
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