What kind of person do you want to avoid?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to avoid three type of people as below.
First of all, I want to avoid a person who is selfish. I don\'t want to meet people who never consider other people.
Second, I don\'t want to spend time with a person who is talkative and never give a chance to speak to an opposite person.
Third, I hate people who is a violent temper. When fall in a trouble, that people wants to solve the trouble with force. I can\'t understand that solution.
There are so many people like this. That is why, being isolated is better than getting along with.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]ny!
Those are self-centered people. They are inconsiderate of other people and insensitive. Sadly, there are kinds of people we can\'t avoid, so force ourselves to get along with them. :((
~ Trixia
Content:
I want to avoid three type of people as below.
- I want to avoid the three types of people listed below.
First of all, I want to avoid a person who is selfish.
- CORRECT.
I don\'t want to meet people who never consider other people.
- CORRECT.
Second, I don\'t want to spend time with a person who is talkative and never give a chance to speak to an opposite person.
- Second, I don\'t want to spend time with someone who is talkative and never give others a chance to speak.
Third, I hate people who is a violent temper.
- Third, I hate people who have violent tempers.
When fall in a trouble, that people wants to solve the trouble with force.
- When people fall into trouble, they want to solve the trouble with force.
I can\'t understand that solution.
- CORRECT.
There are so many people like this.
- CORRECT.
That is why, being isolated is better than getting along with.
- That is why being isolated is better than getting along with someone.
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