What kind of person do you want your child to become, and how can you guide him toward that?
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What kind of person do you want your child to become, and how can you guide him toward that?
I want my son to become a person who live real his life. I mean that nobody cannot push his life as they wish, involved me. So I told him one thing. If you think it is not right, you can say \'No\', even if it is parent\'s opinions. But, It also has side-effect. When he need to do as I want in a situation related on safe etc, he say this story calmly.
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Hello, Stella! It\'s important to encourage your son to follow his own path and stay true to himself. ^^ I hope he grows up to be just as you wish him to be.
~T. Jewel
I want my son to become a person who live real his life.
>>I want my son to become a person who lives his life for real.
OR
>>I want my son to become someone who truly lives his life.
I mean that nobody cannot push his life as they wish, involved me.
>>I mean that no one can push his life as they wish, including me.
So I told him one thing.
>>CORRECT
If you think it is not right, you can say \'No\', even if it is parent\'s opinions.
>>If you think it\'s not right, you can say \'No,\' even if it\'s your parent\'s opinion.
But, It also has side-effect.
>>But there is also a side effect.
When he need to do as I want in a situation related on safe etc, he say this story calmly.
>>When he needs to do what I want in a situation related to safety, he calmly tells me this story.
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