What kind of person is a good team member?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are some criteria for good team members that I think.
First, you need to listen well and know how to speak well.
To be a good tema, you need to be active in sharing ideas. To do that, you need to be able to speak your mind well. In addition, you need to know how to listen to other people\'s opinions well.
Second, you should always work hard.
It is also important to work hard on everything given to you and you need a passionatd attitude.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your answer with me.
I truly agree with the factors that you have shared regarding what makes a good team member. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
There are some criteria for good team members that I think.
>> There are some criteria that I think make a good team member.
>> There are some criteria that I think make a good team member.
First, you need to listen well and know how to speak well.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: First, you should be a good listener and a good communicator.
To be a good tema, you need to be active in sharing ideas.
>> To be a good team member, you need to be active in sharing ideas.
To do that, you need to be able to speak your mind well.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: To do that, you should be able to express your opinions clearly.
In addition, you need to know how to listen to other people\'s opinions well.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It’s equally important to listen and respect other people’s views.
Second, you should always work hard.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Secondly, you should always put effort into your work.
It is also important to work hard on everything given to you and you need a passionatd attitude.
>> It is also important to work hard on every task given to you and to have a passionate attitude.
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