What kind of pollution bothers you most on a day-to-day basis?

2020-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Dee

학생이 쓴 원문

The world is in trouble with virus contamination. There are always pollutants around us. Korea is polluted with yellow dust and fine dust from China, We were always wearing masks. Because of the corona virus that is polluting the world now, you have to always use a mask. I hate air pollution the most. Air pollution is because individuals cannot stop it. Research into harming human health due to pollution will continue.

강사 첨삭

Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank you for completing your homework today. I hope you\'re having a good day!~~T.Dee

The world is in trouble with virus contamination.
>>The world is in trouble with the spread f the virus.
There are always pollutants around us.
>>CORRECT!
Korea is polluted with yellow dust and fine dust from China, We were always wearing masks.
>>Korea is polluted with yellow dust and fine dust from China which is why are always wearing masks.
Because of the corona virus that is polluting the world now, you have to always use a mask.
>>Because of the corona virus that is spreading in the world now, you have to always use a mask.
I hate air pollution the most.
>>CORRECT!
Air pollution is because individuals cannot stop it.
>>I hate it because individuals cannot stop it.
Research into harming human health due to pollution will continue.
>>CORRECT!

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