What kind of pollution is the most risky
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I think that the pollutions of water, air and other environmental factors are equivalently important. The things that Korean people are interested in at the moment is the fine dusty(micro dusty) from China. This air pollution is caused the pain of nose and mouthpiece then it affects people\'s health consistently. Due to this pollution, there\'re the essential items for Korean. One is the mask and the other is the air cleaner. I heard the news that the luxury apartment which was built for upper class lately, had been fully equipped this air cleaner inside of the wall. Unfortunately, I\'m not the rich so only thing I can do is just buying the mask from the supermarket.ㅠㅠ
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Hello Adela!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic. Keep it up! ^^ looking forward to more of your insight.
~~Teacher Kate
>>I think that the pollution of water, air and other environmental factors are equally important.
The things that Korean people are interested in at the moment is the fine dust(micro dust) from China.
>>CORRECT!
This air pollution is caused the pain of nose and mouthpiece then it affects people\'s health consistently.
>>This air pollution causes nasal and oral pain then it affects people\'s health consistently.
Due to this pollution, there\'re the essential items for Korean. One is the mask and the other is the air cleaner.
>>CORRECT!
I heard the news that the luxury apartment which was built for upper class lately, had been fully equipped this air cleaner inside of the wall.
>>I heard in the news that the luxury apartment which was built for upper class lately, had been fully equipped with air cleaners installed beneath the walls.
Unfortunately, I\'m not the rich so only thing I can do is just buying the mask from the supermarket
>>Unfortunately, I\'m not rich so the only thing I can do is buy the mask from the supermarket.
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