What kind of pollution personally bothers you most? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Air pollution is the most bothersome to me. If the air around me is bad, I feel annoyed in breathing. When it comes to the amount or impact of it, air pollution is incomparable to other pollution. It is the most influential because we inhale a great deal of air in a single day. So almost every house has an air purifier to keep providing clean air to the family in the living room. I even saw some families have an air purifier in every room to get much cleaner air. I think the reason there is a boom to grow plants inside the house is the same as the reason people install air purifiers in the house. Apart from the private sector’s efforts to have clean air, our Government is also trying to keep the air clean by pursuing its carbon-neutral movement across the board.
강사 첨삭
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See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
Air pollution is the most bothersome to me. If the air around me is bad, I feel annoyed in breathing.
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When it comes to the amount or impact of it, air pollution is incomparable to other pollution.
>>> CORRECT!
It is the most influential because we inhale a great deal of air in a single day.
>>> CORRECT!
So almost every house has an air purifier to keep providing clean air to the family in the living room.
>>> CORRECT!
I even saw some families have an air purifier in every room to get much cleaner air.
>>> CORRECT!
I think the reason there is a boom to grow plants inside the house is the same as the reason people install air purifiers in the house.
>>> CORRECT!
Apart from the private sector’s efforts to have clean air, our Government is also trying to keep the air clean by pursuing its carbon-neutral movement across the board.
>>> CORRECT!
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