What kind of public transport do you use? / How important do you think it is to use public transport
학생이 쓴 원문
I use bus or subway. When I go to school, I use only bus. Because my university school is near by my house. And when I go to work, I use bus and subway and only when I go to meet my friends to play or eat meal, I sometimes drive mother\'s car. But I don\'t like public transport because using public transport have ling time. I think public transport is very important for society and environment so on but just I don\'t like that. In the bus or subway, I can\'t listen a song loudly, sing a song and talking with someone, so I like car.
강사 첨삭
Hi Sally,
Public transportation contributes to a healthier environment by improving air quality and reducing oil consumption, and through better land-use policies. It will, in turn, reduce pollution, and traffic jams and also lower the rates of accidents as public transport has to undergo many safety measures. And public transport is always cheaper than private ones. It also helps to expand business development and work opportunities. It is critical for emergency situations requiring safe and efficient evacuation. \"Have a safe trip\" ~ Teacher QUENNY..:)
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I use bus or subway.
>>I use normally the bus or subway.
When I go to school, I use only bus. Because my university school is near by my house.
>> When I go to school, I only use the bus because my University school is nearby my house.
And when I go to work, I use bus and subway and only when I go to meet my friends to play or eat meal, I sometimes drive mother\'s car.
>> And when I go to work, I also ride a bus and subway. And I sometimes drive my mother\'s car only when I go to meet my friends to play or eat a meal with them.
But I don\'t like public transport because using public transport have ling time.
>> But I don\'t like to ride public transport all the time because it takes a long time to use public transport when you\'re traveling.
I think public transport is very important for society and environment so on but just I don\'t like that.
>> I think public transport is very important for society and the environment but just I don\'t like to ride a bus or subway all the time.
In the bus or subway, I can\'t listen a song loudly, sing a song and talking with someone, so I like car.
>> On the bus or subway, I can\'t listen to music loudly, sing a song, and talk with someone unlike when you\'re riding a car that\'s the reason why I like the car because I enjoy listening to loud music while driving.
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I use bus or subway. When I go to school, I use only bus. Because my university school is near by my house. And when I go to work, I use bus and subway and only when I go to meet my friends to play or eat meal, I sometimes drive mother\'s car. But I don\'t like public transport because using public transport have ling time. I think public transport is very important for society and environment so on but just I don\'t like that. In the bus or subway, I can\'t listen a song loudly, sing a song and talking with someone, so I like car.
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