What kind of public transports do you have in your city?which is the safest and most dangerous.
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My city in the many transports. First transports is taxi,taxi is very fast and relax but very expensive.
Second is bus, bus is cheap and very safe but very slowly.
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Jean~~
What kind of public transports do you have in your city?which is the safest and most dangerous?
My city in the many transports.
>>> My city has many means of transportation.
First transports is taxi,taxi is very fast and relax but very expensive.
>>> The first type of transport is the taxi. Taxis are very fast and comfortable, but they are expensive.
Second is bus, bus is cheap and very safe but very slowly.
>>> The second option is the bus. Buses are cheap and safe, but they are slow.
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