What kind of scenery or view captivates you most? Why?
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Well, I don\'t like it the most, but I have a favorite scenery or view.
First, it is a scenery or view with a romantic atmosphere.
For example, let me explain Hungary, which I want to go to the most. The street will be filled with lights and trams will pass in the open air with a clear view or the Danube.
Because I\'m emotional and romantic atmosphere is my favorite. So, I like the this atmosphere.
Second, the ocean view with a blue ocean.
Koreans prefer an ocean view with a blue ocean. I like it. Because it is beautiful and feels cool when I see it from high place. Also, when I hear the sound of the waves, I feel calm and comfortable.
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You did so well in making your essay. It was nice that I can imagine the scenery that you have mentioned. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
Well, I don\'t like it the most, but I have a favorite scenery or view.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: It might not be my absolute favorite, but there is a specific view I love.
First, it is a scenery or view with a romantic atmosphere.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: First, I love scenery with a romantic atmosphere.
For example, let me explain Hungary, which I want to go to the most.
>> CORRECT.
The street will be filled with lights and trams will pass in the open air with a clear view or the Danube.
>> The streets are filled with lights, and trams pass by in the open air with a clear view of the Danube.
Because I\'m emotional and romantic atmosphere is my favorite.
>> CORRECT.
So, I like the this atmosphere.
>> So, I like this atmosphere.
Second, the ocean view with a blue ocean.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Second is the blue ocean.
Koreans prefer an ocean view with a blue ocean.
>> CORRECT.
I like it. Because it is beautiful and feels cool when I see it from high place.
>> I like it because it is beautiful and feels refreshing when I see it from a high place.
Also, when I hear the sound of the waves, I feel calm and comfortable.
>> CORRECT.
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