What kind of things do you often shop for?
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I often shop for sports tapes which are known athletic tapes that are used to for added support and protection by professional athletes while they are performing or partaking in a sporting activity. It is also used by amateurs who proactively participate in sports. I often buy daily necessities like air gels and clothes. However, the majority of my shopping is for groceries.I rarely buy expensive things, so that I’m not a regular customer to department stores.I often go to big discount stores. There are many small traditional street markets in Korea. However, they suffer a lot these days because customers are turning their backs to shopping malls that are more convenient and even cheaper. Street markets are somewhat not neat, neither well organized. Customers have to take a hassle to park their cars. Moreover, the street markets are not heated or cooled. Shopping gives people excitement, pleasure, and satisfaction. It is so delightful, but we should be cautious about being addictive.
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I often shop for sports tapes which are known athletic tapes that are used to for added support and protection by professional athletes while they are performing or partaking in a sporting activity.
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It is also used by amateurs who proactively participate in sports.
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I often buy daily necessities like air gels and clothes.
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However, the majority of my shopping is for groceries.
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I rarely buy expensive things, so that I’m not a regular customer to department stores.
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I often go to big discount stores.
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There are many small traditional street markets in Korea.
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However, they suffer a lot these days because customers are turning their backs to shopping malls that are more convenient and even cheaper.
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Street markets are somewhat not neat, neither well organized.
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Customers have to take a hassle to park their cars.
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Moreover, the street markets are not heated or cooled.
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Shopping gives people excitement, pleasure, and satisfaction.
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It is so delightful, but we should be cautious about being addictive.
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