What kind of tour do you want to experience?
학생이 쓴 원문
I hope the some institutions are launching meaningful programs for the multiracials.
If the programs were divided into several coures like how to make traditional food, learning cultures, and experiencing k-pop and so on, it could make them to recall memories for a long time.
while they are leaning and doing something that they want, they get a good impressions to the countries.
Especailly I think the korea is short of tour resources like wonderful nature places, special culture, and delicous food compared to other counties.
I think to overcome these problem, we have to force making somthing special programs that well-known worldwide such as k-pop, k-beauty and medical systems.
Although It is difficult to be satisfied with all, we have to make an effort to launch something special programs.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. This sounds good. There would be more things and options for tourists to enjoy if it happens.
- T. Beth
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I hope the some institutions are launching meaningful programs for the multiracials. >>> I hope some institutions are launching meaningful programs for the multiracial residents in Korea..
If the programs were divided into several coures like how to make traditional food, learning cultures, and experiencing k-pop and so on, it could make them to recall memories for a long time.
>>> If the programs were divided into several courses like how to make traditional food, learning cultures, and experiencing k-pop and so on, it could make them recall memories for a long time.
while they are leaning and doing something that they want, they get a good impressions to the countries.
>>> While they are learning and doing something that they want, they get a good impression of the countries.
Especailly I think the korea is short of tour resources like wonderful nature places, special culture, and delicous food compared to other counties.
>>> Especially I think that Korea is short of tourist attractions like wonderful nature places, special culture, and delicious food compared to other counties.
I think to overcome these problem, we have to force making somthing special programs that well-known worldwide such as k-pop, k-beauty and medical systems.
>>> I think to overcome these problems, we have to force making special programs that are well-known worldwide such as k-pop, k-beauty and medical systems.
Although It is difficult to be satisfied with all, we have to make an effort to launch something special programs.
>>> Although It is difficult to be satisfied with all, we have to make an effort to launch some special programs.
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