What kind of transportation do you want to be developed in your country?
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In my country already have various type of transportation, such as bus, subway, fast train.. etc..
so i just thinking about that is we don\'t have to developed transportaion anymore. it\'s enough in my lived area.
but i don\'t know other city\'s situation. i already lived in developed city.
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Dan,
It\'s great to know that your country has one of the best transport in the world.
Thank you for sharing!
Aki~
In my country already have various type of transportation, such as bus, subway, fast train.. etc..
>>> My country has already various types of transportation such as bus, subway, fast train, etc.
so i just thinking about that is we don\'t have to developed transportaion anymore. it\'s enough in my lived area.
>>> So I am just thinking that in my area, we already developed the transport system.
but i don\'t know other city\'s situation. i already lived in developed city.
>>> However, I am not sure about other areas because I am already living in a developed city.
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