What kind of TV programs do Korean kids watch these days? Explain your answer.
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I think Korean kids watch YouTube a lot these days If watch a lot of YouTube, eyes are not good
I think it would be better to read a book than to watch YouTube.
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What kind of TV programs do Korean kids watch these days? Explain your answer.
I think Korean kids watch YouTube a lot these days
>> I think Korean kids watch YouTube a lot these days.
If watch a lot of YouTube, eyes are not good
>> Watching a lot of YouTube videos might damage my eyesight.
I think it would be better to read a book than to watch YouTube.
>> OR: I prefer reading books to watching YouTube.
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