What kind of TV series would you like to be made soon?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to make to my stories from animation movie. Because my life is many accidence. And i saw a lot unique and strange friends. So i had many thought about person. I want to say that i had thought l.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, [이름] [이름]! It sounds like you have a lot of interesting experiences and ideas! Turning your stories into an animation movie could be a great way to share them with others and express yourself creatively.
~T. Jenna
I want to make to my stories from animation movie.
>>I want to make my stories into an animated movie.
Because my life is many accidence.
>> It is because my life has had many accidents.
And i saw a lot unique and strange friends.
>> And, I\'ve met a lot of unique and strange friends.
So i had many thought about person.
>>So, I\'ve had many thoughts about people.
I want to say that i had thought l.
>>I want to share what I\'ve thought.
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