What kind of TV show would you like to see?
학생이 쓴 원문
I`m hooked on subscribing netflix thesedays. When i have freetime I usaully access netflix to watch other countries drama.
They offer the new joiner one month free. During a month I could find a lot of intersting drama which is competely different from the korea drama and animation. So I have no choice but to love it.
And it is possible to share the id to the 4 gadgets like tablets, laptops and smartphones without delay.
I think the korea dramas are childish for me. when i see that kind of drama, I feel that It is like a movie and they are making a drama with several type of subject like war,super natural power, cri[이름]als. It is not common to see it including lots of special effects, various subject.
I`m satisfied with subscribing that platform to spend a time at anywhere.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]. Thank you for this. That would be a good way to learn English as well.
- T. Beth
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I`m hooked on subscribing netflix thesedays. >>> I`m hooked on subscribing in Netflix these days.
When i have freetime I usaully access netflix to watch other countries drama.
>>> When I have free time I usually access Netflix to watch other countries\' dramas.
They offer the new joiner one month free.
>>> They offer free one month access to new subscribers.
During a month I could find a lot of intersting drama which is competely different from the korea drama and animation.
>>> During a month I could find a lot of interesting dramas which are completely different from the Korean dramas and animation.
So I have no choice but to love it.
>>> OR: So I end up loving them.
And it is possible to share the id to the 4 gadgets like tablets, laptops and smartphones without delay.
And it is possible to share the id to the 4 gadgets like tablets, laptops and smartphones without delay.
>>> correct
I think the korea dramas are childish for me.
I think the korea dramas are childish for me.
>>> I think the Korean dramas are childish for me.
>>> OR: I find Korean dramas a bit childish.
when i see that kind of drama, I feel that It is like a movie and they are making a drama with several type of subject like war,super natural power, cri[이름]als.
>>> When I see those kinds of drama, I feel that it is like a movie and they are making a drama with several type of subjects like war, super natural power, crime, etc.
It is not common to see it including lots of special effects, various subject.
>>> It is not common to see it with lots of special effects and various subjects.
I`m satisfied with subscribing that platform to spend a time at anywhere.
>>> I`m satisfied with subscribing to that platform to spend time anywhere.
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