What kind of vehicle would you like to have in the future? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
I would like to have an airplane in the future.
If I have an airplane, I want to fly an airplane.
And I want to go on a trip in the world.
강사 첨삭
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What kind of vehicle would you like to have in the future? Explain your answer.
I would like to have an airplane in the future.
>> CORRECT~~
>> OR: I dream of having a plane someday.
If I have an airplane, I want to fly an airplane.
>> If I had an airplane, I would learn how to fly it.
And I want to go on a trip in the world.
>> And I would go on a trip around the world.
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