What kind of work do you want to do in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
My mission of work is doing postive things for social.
So my first goal which meas in a decade, I really eager to be managing social program.
Social program can be a donation, social contribution ect like that.
I just want to earn money by doing social program. and i have to learn about how to do the processing.
And next, I want to make own social program by coporate donation. nowadays it called various word, like CRS, ESG management.
I will contribute to redistributiion of inequality.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]ny! Your goals are very admirable. ^^ It’s great to see such a clear focus on making a positive impact in society. I wish you the best of luck in achieving them. Thank you for sharing~ See you in class tomorrow!
~T. Jewel
My mission of work is doing postive things for social.
>>My work mission is to make a positive impact on society.
So my first goal which meas in a decade, I really eager to be managing social program.
So my first goal which meas in a decade, I really eager to be managing social program.
>>My first goal, which I aim to achieve in a decade, is to manage a social program, and I am really eager about it.
Social program can be a donation, social contribution ect like that.
Social program can be a donation, social contribution ect like that.
>>A social program can include donations, social contributions, and other similar activities.
I just want to earn money by doing social program. and i have to learn about how to do the processing.
I just want to earn money by doing social program. and i have to learn about how to do the processing.
>>I want to earn money by running a social program, so I need to learn how to manage the process.
And next, I want to make own social program by coporate donation.
And next, I want to make own social program by coporate donation.
>>Next, I want to create my own social program funded by corporate donations.
nowadays it called various word, like CRS, ESG management.
>>Nowadays, it’s called by various terms, such as CSR or ESG management.
I will contribute to redistributiion of inequality
>>Nowadays, it’s called by various terms, such as CSR or ESG management.
I will contribute to redistributiion of inequality
>>I will contribute to reducing inequality.
OR
>>I want to help reduce inequality.
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